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that beauty's only skin deep... so while one little girl's crying has now stopped it has transferred to the one with acne beneath her? If words have such strength then why have we attached such a strong word and then stapled, in such a careless way? We have hurt the feelings of the ugly people as if there exists such a thing we have scarred so many children's inner beauty What about the girl who wants to be a model so bad she based her personality off of it her skin is literally all she has and we have now made her to think that she is unwanted and has nothing but her skin deep beauty so she needs a man who understands her pain, a man of the same skin... surely only he could know her pain cut through all this vain and all is lost because men and women are not one in the same especially nowadays Far worst the girl who is in between feeling distraught over her ugly friends and trying to save them meanwhile being jealous over her superficial ones who "stick" together While the ugly find each other and the beautiful set a bad example perpetually... I look for the girl named compromise she knows the struggles of which I surmise and maybe, though society seems to bind us fate will come along and find us and remind us that beauty is not deep as the skin... It is as deep as the soul within.
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Jan 23, 2013
Jan 23, 2013 at 2:27 AM UTC
They really should stop saying
that beauty's only skin deep... so while one little girl's crying has now stopped it has transferred to the one with acne beneath her? If words have such strength then why have we attached such a strong word and then stapled, in such a careless way? We have hurt the feelings of the ugly people as if there exists such a thing we have scarred so many children's inner beauty What about the girl who wants to be a model so bad she based her personality off of it her skin is literally all she has and we have now made her to think that she is unwanted and has nothing but her skin deep beauty so she needs a man who understands her pain, a man of the same skin... surely only he could know her pain cut through all this vain and all is lost because men and women are not one in the same especially nowadays Far worst the girl who is in between feeling distraught over her ugly friends and trying to save them meanwhile being jealous over her superficial ones who "stick" together While the ugly find each other and the beautiful set a bad example perpetually... I look for the girl named compromise she knows the struggles of which I surmise and maybe, though society seems to bind us fate will come along and find us and remind us that beauty is not deep as the skin... It is as deep as the soul within.
samir
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Syrian
Jan 23, 2013
Jan 23, 2013 at 2:27 AM UTC
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