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i don't know who i am; supposed to be -- if only you were to love me -- only when i am the perfect replication of your mind's child. **your sharp, unforgiving words do not reduce who i am, though all the more i feel unloved.** instead, i have reduced myself to a four-year-old child hoping, wishing, pleading to be loved even a bit -- by you. by what i thought were sincere hugs & kisses, good morning & goodnight.
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May 14, 2016
May 14, 2016 at 9:20 AM UTC
hugs & kisses; good morning & goodnight
i don't know who i am; supposed to be -- if only you were to love me -- only when i am the perfect replication of your mind's child. **your sharp, unforgiving words do not reduce who i am, though all the more i feel unloved.** instead, i have reduced myself to a four-year-old child hoping, wishing, pleading to be loved even a bit -- by you. by what i thought were sincere hugs & kisses, good morning & goodnight.
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May 14, 2016
May 14, 2016 at 9:20 AM UTC
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