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There's a pounding in my head Too sick to be alive, too astir to be dead Everything is hazy, shifting into distant lands A nervous shaking in my hands Am I hot or cold? I feel so vulnerable and young, yet so sickly and old There's a ringing in my ears And I can't stop my tears As fuzzy thoughts, bated breath Feel like impending death My brain is melting, I'm losing my wits The spinning never quits Everything is muddled, whispered despair I'm done, finished, this is too much to bear Maybe I should just...drift away... Maybe I should let my head gently sway.... The shaking stops The darkness drops I don't fight it, I don't try to flee The liquid waves of malaise carry me To somewhere deep within the abyss of my brain And everything disappears, the confusion and pain But it's transient, it doesn't last Consciousness comes back with a blast The waves wash me back ashore, But I still feel wobbly to the core My ebbing spirit  did revive, Though I'm too weak to feel alive
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Mar 1, 2013
Mar 1, 2013 at 10:22 PM UTC
Mortal Syncope
There's a pounding in my head Too sick to be alive, too astir to be dead Everything is hazy, shifting into distant lands A nervous shaking in my hands Am I hot or cold? I feel so vulnerable and young, yet so sickly and old There's a ringing in my ears And I can't stop my tears As fuzzy thoughts, bated breath Feel like impending death My brain is melting, I'm losing my wits The spinning never quits Everything is muddled, whispered despair I'm done, finished, this is too much to bear Maybe I should just...drift away... Maybe I should let my head gently sway.... The shaking stops The darkness drops I don't fight it, I don't try to flee The liquid waves of malaise carry me To somewhere deep within the abyss of my brain And everything disappears, the confusion and pain But it's transient, it doesn't last Consciousness comes back with a blast The waves wash me back ashore, But I still feel wobbly to the core My ebbing spirit  did revive, Though I'm too weak to feel alive
Mortal Syncope by Geneviève Pardoe Macchiarella is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivs 3.0 Unported License.
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Mar 1, 2013
Mar 1, 2013 at 10:22 PM UTC
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