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The Train whistles and sounds Into the early morning: while the cricket’s chirps frantically at the clicking sound of rusty old tracks; my heart beat faster than ever, I had to park my new car; under the old train bridge and board the 6:25 to Bridgton The homeless drug addicts Seem quite content with their long term residency Car 59 I looked to my left, then to my right The foul-smelling car made the morning gloomy Should I sit, or should I stand Something about the early morning commutes That really annoys this Staten Island's South Shore commuters the stench in car 59 The sunlight slowly made its way into the day close to seven am But somehow the addict and his partner didn’t seem to care who broad car 59 so many dialects , so many nationalities my heart beat faster , than ever Why the hell doesn’t Metro North clean up the this train line… ,
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Oct 16, 2013
Oct 16, 2013 at 10:18 AM UTC
Car 59
The Train whistles and sounds Into the early morning: while the cricket’s chirps frantically at the clicking sound of rusty old tracks; my heart beat faster than ever, I had to park my new car; under the old train bridge and board the 6:25 to Bridgton The homeless drug addicts Seem quite content with their long term residency Car 59 I looked to my left, then to my right The foul-smelling car made the morning gloomy Should I sit, or should I stand Something about the early morning commutes That really annoys this Staten Island's South Shore commuters the stench in car 59 The sunlight slowly made its way into the day close to seven am But somehow the addict and his partner didn’t seem to care who broad car 59 so many dialects , so many nationalities my heart beat faster , than ever Why the hell doesn’t Metro North clean up the this train line… ,
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Oct 16, 2013
Oct 16, 2013 at 10:18 AM UTC
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