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It started with a whisper, And that was when I kissed her And then she made my lips hurt I know I didn't write it But the words couldn't be any more true It was almost like time stopped When our lips locked Our clothes stayed on But the bed rocked I kissed your lips and your neck, You took a deep breath, I put my hand on your side, And then you put me in check When I look into your eyes I see the planets align When I look on to the future It's only you on my mind I want to be with you forever In this lifelong endeavor I look into my heart But know this forever is never It hurts me to see That we will probably never be But I'll try strive as hard as I can To be your one and only man As these words flow from my fingertips *I pray that someone will give a **** I know that none of this madness Can make up for my internal sadness When it comes down to it I'm just another hopeless romantic
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Nov 22, 2013
Nov 22, 2013 at 11:48 PM UTC
so unoriginal
It started with a whisper, And that was when I kissed her And then she made my lips hurt I know I didn't write it But the words couldn't be any more true It was almost like time stopped When our lips locked Our clothes stayed on But the bed rocked I kissed your lips and your neck, You took a deep breath, I put my hand on your side, And then you put me in check When I look into your eyes I see the planets align When I look on to the future It's only you on my mind I want to be with you forever In this lifelong endeavor I look into my heart But know this forever is never It hurts me to see That we will probably never be But I'll try strive as hard as I can To be your one and only man As these words flow from my fingertips *I pray that someone will give a **** I know that none of this madness Can make up for my internal sadness When it comes down to it I'm just another hopeless romantic
All of that from Neon Trees on the radio...
ShakurEl
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Nov 22, 2013
Nov 22, 2013 at 11:48 PM UTC
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