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The train is full of strangers I am not looking at them yetI know they are there Bodies pressed close to mine Eyes closed I breath in their lives Old leather shoes, perfume, hair gel and peach lotion The stranger in front of me smells of a wet January afternoon Cold and sharp, yet with a familiar damp mustiness that lingers in his absence To his left is an early morning breakfast smell Oatmeal and sugar Brown sugar with heavy caramel undertones that melt into the memory He steps past Wet January, past Hair Salon and steps off Wet January follows on his heels while Hair Salon remains , now on my right We are joined by English Sitting Room, he is made of cigar smoke and wooden matches, leather arm chair and stone fireplace, beside him is Darkened Movie Theatre and Old Gym Bag Everyone shuffles; hive minded away from Old Gym Bag Hair Salon is muttering. English Sitting Room rustles a newspaper Movie Theatre brushes my shoulder, apologizes and disappears. I wish, vaguely to ask what I might seem to them in my own internal context if only to satisfy the slow bubbling curiosity that wells up in me from some deep hidden place But my stop has come and I am stepping off now Knowing my existence will pass silently from their thoughts all together as soon as the doors close behind me Goodbye Hair Salon and English Sitting Room Farewell Old Gym Bag, until next we meet if ever again
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Mar 8, 2020
Mar 8, 2020 at 3:05 PM UTC
The smell of strangers
The train is full of strangers I am not looking at them yetI know they are there Bodies pressed close to mine Eyes closed I breath in their lives Old leather shoes, perfume, hair gel and peach lotion The stranger in front of me smells of a wet January afternoon Cold and sharp, yet with a familiar damp mustiness that lingers in his absence To his left is an early morning breakfast smell Oatmeal and sugar Brown sugar with heavy caramel undertones that melt into the memory He steps past Wet January, past Hair Salon and steps off Wet January follows on his heels while Hair Salon remains , now on my right We are joined by English Sitting Room, he is made of cigar smoke and wooden matches, leather arm chair and stone fireplace, beside him is Darkened Movie Theatre and Old Gym Bag Everyone shuffles; hive minded away from Old Gym Bag Hair Salon is muttering. English Sitting Room rustles a newspaper Movie Theatre brushes my shoulder, apologizes and disappears. I wish, vaguely to ask what I might seem to them in my own internal context if only to satisfy the slow bubbling curiosity that wells up in me from some deep hidden place But my stop has come and I am stepping off now Knowing my existence will pass silently from their thoughts all together as soon as the doors close behind me Goodbye Hair Salon and English Sitting Room Farewell Old Gym Bag, until next we meet if ever again
sam-greig-mohns
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Mar 8, 2020
Mar 8, 2020 at 3:05 PM UTC
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