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For every action there is a co$t associated with it for each minute‐ of energy that gets expended– you must give up- FOUR— ONE for the task its self and THREE additional– for the decompression your body requires after you complete it. however that is not the most frustrating part to deal with four minutes– -is nothing to give up- in the grand scheme of things It's when you combine- the minute to an hour that something will take to complete now you have spent four hours– to just one thing on the to-do list Even, if you choose_ to do the one hour task you will have to break / that hour up with rest breaks that you'll need now you have disbursed- —eight waking hours for a one hour item on your list but that's not all the, EXTREME fatigue adds to the issue of time- and with just two hours- of work and rest breaks You'll need a nap- -that will last two hours, after eight hours— already invested to accomplish this one thing you will need two naps– just to complete it Now there is twelve hours— on the one thing you needed to do today… I'm exhausted- -its time for bed I'll HAVE to do this ALL OVER AGAIN TOMORROW
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Apr 5
Apr 5, 2026 at 11:16 AM UTC
Frustrating Fact
For every action there is a co$t associated with it for each minute‐ of energy that gets expended– you must give up- FOUR— ONE for the task its self and THREE additional– for the decompression your body requires after you complete it. however that is not the most frustrating part to deal with four minutes– -is nothing to give up- in the grand scheme of things It's when you combine- the minute to an hour that something will take to complete now you have spent four hours– to just one thing on the to-do list Even, if you choose_ to do the one hour task you will have to break / that hour up with rest breaks that you'll need now you have disbursed- —eight waking hours for a one hour item on your list but that's not all the, EXTREME fatigue adds to the issue of time- and with just two hours- of work and rest breaks You'll need a nap- -that will last two hours, after eight hours— already invested to accomplish this one thing you will need two naps– just to complete it Now there is twelve hours— on the one thing you needed to do today… I'm exhausted- -its time for bed I'll HAVE to do this ALL OVER AGAIN TOMORROW
I live with fibromyalga every day. Its a misunderstood disease that many either dont beleive exsists or are simply unaware of all that is associated with it. This is just one of the symptoms that is frustrating to those who have it and bothers those that love those who do. My poetry exercise today was to make a poem as one long sentence about an extreme frustrating moment.
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Apr 5
Apr 5, 2026 at 11:16 AM UTC
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