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I'm afraid of leaving myself alone with me, because i'm not afraid of death, and my body tries to **** itself without my mind consenting. It's an absence of brainwaves. absolute nothing is scarier than pain at least pain has a reason but this nothing consumes it eats me alive lingering in my thoughts, my words, my actions. it's an absence of brainwaves. it's an absence of life.
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Aug 29, 2014
Aug 29, 2014 at 9:04 PM UTC
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I'm afraid of leaving myself alone with me, because i'm not afraid of death, and my body tries to **** itself without my mind consenting. It's an absence of brainwaves. absolute nothing is scarier than pain at least pain has a reason but this nothing consumes it eats me alive lingering in my thoughts, my words, my actions. it's an absence of brainwaves. it's an absence of life.
i'm inexperienced when it comes to poetry so any constructive criticism would be appreciated, thank you.
elizabeth-larsen
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Aug 29, 2014
Aug 29, 2014 at 9:04 PM UTC
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