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Insecurity, the greatest foe comes quickly with it's harshest blow seeps into the mind destroys the soul questioning criticizing corrupting slowly starts to eat away that sense of self that once did stay it needs to stop this internal pain but, it's too strong so what's the use? with a sick desire for self-abuse it's too strong and so it wins the brush is the blade the canvas the skin now it's started really stared that sense of self has truly parted a new self image has overtaken and thwarted the mind so visibly shaken it slowly starts to build a fence an inland battle does then commence
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Jul 23, 2014
Jul 23, 2014 at 7:19 PM UTC
Irrational Fear:
Insecurity, the greatest foe comes quickly with it's harshest blow seeps into the mind destroys the soul questioning criticizing corrupting slowly starts to eat away that sense of self that once did stay it needs to stop this internal pain but, it's too strong so what's the use? with a sick desire for self-abuse it's too strong and so it wins the brush is the blade the canvas the skin now it's started really stared that sense of self has truly parted a new self image has overtaken and thwarted the mind so visibly shaken it slowly starts to build a fence an inland battle does then commence
The first song I've ever written
raine-balson
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Jul 23, 2014
Jul 23, 2014 at 7:19 PM UTC
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