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A little prototype So fortunate there was no one alike A truly remarkable prototype, but after all just that And as it goes with those, it got replaced with another, slightly better Terrified and afraid, it was now sent to the shredder But before it got there, it was revisited The prototype thought that was wonderful Its future was a little brighter, and colourful It was happy to get another chance, to enhance It did its best to look good, as it should It now had an outstanding design But unfortunately, once again declined Now crushed and defeated it wandered the testing site and factory grounds, wondering why the world could be so cruel Just a single approval could be so crucial And every disapproval so brutal and roughshod Simply the prototype, must be no good Suddenly a pair of kind, caring hands picked it up A pair of hands that understands the prototype It was carefully looked at and a few screws was tightened New technology was inserted, and a few bulbs was lightened New hope rose as the insecurity was broke Once again examined carefully Now the prototype was truly a beauty It jumped up and down, as it was finally accepted and put into production, happy and relieved as it had now served a real function
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May 22, 2018
May 22, 2018 at 2:23 PM UTC
Cunning Little Prototype
A little prototype So fortunate there was no one alike A truly remarkable prototype, but after all just that And as it goes with those, it got replaced with another, slightly better Terrified and afraid, it was now sent to the shredder But before it got there, it was revisited The prototype thought that was wonderful Its future was a little brighter, and colourful It was happy to get another chance, to enhance It did its best to look good, as it should It now had an outstanding design But unfortunately, once again declined Now crushed and defeated it wandered the testing site and factory grounds, wondering why the world could be so cruel Just a single approval could be so crucial And every disapproval so brutal and roughshod Simply the prototype, must be no good Suddenly a pair of kind, caring hands picked it up A pair of hands that understands the prototype It was carefully looked at and a few screws was tightened New technology was inserted, and a few bulbs was lightened New hope rose as the insecurity was broke Once again examined carefully Now the prototype was truly a beauty It jumped up and down, as it was finally accepted and put into production, happy and relieved as it had now served a real function
Just a day, someone somewhere will find you and think, "Awe how neat".
Jolan
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24/M/Denmark
May 22, 2018
May 22, 2018 at 2:23 PM UTC
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