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Lydia tried to spin Benny's six shooter around her finger as he had done but it slipped off her thin finger and fell on the grass. How do you do it and I can't? she said. Practice and practice he said picking up the gun and showed her how it was done. Can I try again? she said. He handed her the gun she put on her finger and tried again but it fell off onto the grass once more. He picked up the gun and said here let me put it on your finger and so he did and held it there now turn your finger slightly upward and spin it. He released her finger and she raised her finger spun it around and it stayed on. She said done it done it and looped the gun into her hand now I'm a proper cowgirl. Sure are Benny said do it again. She spun the gun on her finger again and it spun around. Good see you can do it he said. He took the gun from her finger and spun it around his finger quick and slipped it into his holster at his side. She was pleased she'd done it. They walked off the grass and back up the slope into the Square as it was lunchtime and her mother said not to be late. So he left her at her door and went up to his flat to see if his mother had his lunch also. He liked that he'd showed her how to spin the gun and it had been good and fun.
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Mar 27, 2017
Mar 27, 2017 at 12:02 PM UTC
LYDIA'S SPIN 1958
Lydia tried to spin Benny's six shooter around her finger as he had done but it slipped off her thin finger and fell on the grass. How do you do it and I can't? she said. Practice and practice he said picking up the gun and showed her how it was done. Can I try again? she said. He handed her the gun she put on her finger and tried again but it fell off onto the grass once more. He picked up the gun and said here let me put it on your finger and so he did and held it there now turn your finger slightly upward and spin it. He released her finger and she raised her finger spun it around and it stayed on. She said done it done it and looped the gun into her hand now I'm a proper cowgirl. Sure are Benny said do it again. She spun the gun on her finger again and it spun around. Good see you can do it he said. He took the gun from her finger and spun it around his finger quick and slipped it into his holster at his side. She was pleased she'd done it. They walked off the grass and back up the slope into the Square as it was lunchtime and her mother said not to be late. So he left her at her door and went up to his flat to see if his mother had his lunch also. He liked that he'd showed her how to spin the gun and it had been good and fun.
A BOY AND GIRL IN .LONDON IN 1958
TerryCollett
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Mar 27, 2017
Mar 27, 2017 at 12:02 PM UTC
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