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How do you hear the whisper of life My life has never whispered to me Your life's a fun adventure, you say Yet all I see is pain strewn along my lane Am I treading the right path, or am I lost? How long has it been since I swayed away? I cannot tell the time; it's night always Has the sun forgotten it needs to shine upon my path as well? I see a glimmer, a shining something Never mind, I blinked, and it vanished again It’s like a faded dream, naught but shades of grey For so long, I've been pacing this way My feet hurt, but I cannot stop I must find a safe haven first All these thorns scattered along my way How is it fair, when it pierces whether I stand still or break away? It feels as if a ***** joke is being played on me Unguided, I’m led to grasp a rope that isn’t there Stop, walk, or run I may, on this uncharted land In vain, I am laboured to bleed for a dead end How do you hear the melody of life? My life has never hummed to me I've lost the rhythm of life Now it's just me and the noise I make, all the life's notes, long burned away
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Feb 15
Feb 15, 2026 at 10:22 PM UTC
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How do you hear the whisper of life My life has never whispered to me Your life's a fun adventure, you say Yet all I see is pain strewn along my lane Am I treading the right path, or am I lost? How long has it been since I swayed away? I cannot tell the time; it's night always Has the sun forgotten it needs to shine upon my path as well? I see a glimmer, a shining something Never mind, I blinked, and it vanished again It’s like a faded dream, naught but shades of grey For so long, I've been pacing this way My feet hurt, but I cannot stop I must find a safe haven first All these thorns scattered along my way How is it fair, when it pierces whether I stand still or break away? It feels as if a ***** joke is being played on me Unguided, I’m led to grasp a rope that isn’t there Stop, walk, or run I may, on this uncharted land In vain, I am laboured to bleed for a dead end How do you hear the melody of life? My life has never hummed to me I've lost the rhythm of life Now it's just me and the noise I make, all the life's notes, long burned away
GrimScythe2001
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24/M/Free Soul Street
Feb 15
Feb 15, 2026 at 10:22 PM UTC
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