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REMNANTS RISING Rising from reductions ,weightless whisp then a possibility of fright in flight Startled, raked back into normalcy, ignorance to the fathoms of the breath the inner depths Blissfully blind to the peers, but internally largely unknown fears, passive knowing only right Fractions of forces gathered to form a mass ,drips driven down gradually gaining while you slept As a minion not forming an opinion is never a crime ,shame or blame a yet to be played game That blink or wink still unknown verbs ,waiting for the possibility to become part of your personality Remaining suppressed, not ready for our minds or souls to fully digest,awaiting in embers until forming a flame Naivete begins as a valuable trait ,holding back fears or tears ,behind curtains ,future fumblings maybe forthcoming Applications in stages,still blind but curiosity for the future is strength,from blind to building blocks Distressing verbiage now seen as fancy neuro terms ,tics ,twitches ,no longer from unknown trenches when younger we plunder ,no time to sit or wonder,maybe symptoms mild,grains waiting to be rocks Mediocrity can become costly in blunders ,recall that knowledge or sit wondering on the benches Mild medium as kind stages then BOLD,BRASH even DEADLY,DISASTROUS no longer just phases Presence of mind now seen as a "present to OUR kind" no fiction or labels, now a need to be stable Discovery is not an end but maybe a new beginning ,future pain now known to be winning alien ramblings into recognized ,certified,specialty, terminology ,up to par not living a fable.R.C.
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Apr 20, 2017
Apr 20, 2017 at 6:18 AM UTC
REMNANTS RISING
REMNANTS RISING Rising from reductions ,weightless whisp then a possibility of fright in flight Startled, raked back into normalcy, ignorance to the fathoms of the breath the inner depths Blissfully blind to the peers, but internally largely unknown fears, passive knowing only right Fractions of forces gathered to form a mass ,drips driven down gradually gaining while you slept As a minion not forming an opinion is never a crime ,shame or blame a yet to be played game That blink or wink still unknown verbs ,waiting for the possibility to become part of your personality Remaining suppressed, not ready for our minds or souls to fully digest,awaiting in embers until forming a flame Naivete begins as a valuable trait ,holding back fears or tears ,behind curtains ,future fumblings maybe forthcoming Applications in stages,still blind but curiosity for the future is strength,from blind to building blocks Distressing verbiage now seen as fancy neuro terms ,tics ,twitches ,no longer from unknown trenches when younger we plunder ,no time to sit or wonder,maybe symptoms mild,grains waiting to be rocks Mediocrity can become costly in blunders ,recall that knowledge or sit wondering on the benches Mild medium as kind stages then BOLD,BRASH even DEADLY,DISASTROUS no longer just phases Presence of mind now seen as a "present to OUR kind" no fiction or labels, now a need to be stable Discovery is not an end but maybe a new beginning ,future pain now known to be winning alien ramblings into recognized ,certified,specialty, terminology ,up to par not living a fable.R.C.
Dusted this off. Think this works well in showing how to not let something or things from our past truly possess our current living. Indifference is not resolution,blind still is a blurry memory,allow to live for a future. Appreciate your reading all input is a big help. "Peace Takes Practice" Rick
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Apr 20, 2017
Apr 20, 2017 at 6:18 AM UTC
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