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Please dear, you  know I Love you, and that I need you. Everything in my life has gone down hill, As this bad luck Streak persists. Even though it all went bad, I was Still happy I had you. But you've Taken it away from me. Well, perhaps not completely. Amorous activity kind of engaged, and You said, "Maybe It doesn't have to end." Now Everything has gotten a little better, yet I have this Eerie-like feeling. Do You really still want me, just as much as you previously did? Obviously, you still have feeling, but I'm Unsure if its the exact same as before.
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Nov 2, 2012
Nov 2, 2012 at 4:51 PM UTC
More than it appears
Please dear, you  know I Love you, and that I need you. Everything in my life has gone down hill, As this bad luck Streak persists. Even though it all went bad, I was Still happy I had you. But you've Taken it away from me. Well, perhaps not completely. Amorous activity kind of engaged, and You said, "Maybe It doesn't have to end." Now Everything has gotten a little better, yet I have this Eerie-like feeling. Do You really still want me, just as much as you previously did? Obviously, you still have feeling, but I'm Unsure if its the exact same as before.
The poem is more than it appears.
hannah-west
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Nov 2, 2012
Nov 2, 2012 at 4:51 PM UTC
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