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this kids, is how you do it in the mid of the dark hours, when two am is your new oldest friend when sleep, your oldest old one, left town on the midnight train, taking your peace of mind though she is far away lost in dream-thoughts caught, but only twelve inches close, granting you an unasked permission, you ok to stroke her hair, undisturbing her, yet comforting yourself, every voice in your temple'd altar praying, one glorious chorus godly chant: Oh Lord, what would I do without her? and you stroke her hair and are saved. 2:51am May 2014
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May 6, 2014
May 6, 2014 at 2:56 AM UTC
So kid, you think you can write love poems?
this kids, is how you do it in the mid of the dark hours, when two am is your new oldest friend when sleep, your oldest old one, left town on the midnight train, taking your peace of mind though she is far away lost in dream-thoughts caught, but only twelve inches close, granting you an unasked permission, you ok to stroke her hair, undisturbing her, yet comforting yourself, every voice in your temple'd altar praying, one glorious chorus godly chant: Oh Lord, what would I do without her? and you stroke her hair and are saved. 2:51am May 2014
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99/M/NYC/Lippstadt/Kraków
May 6, 2014
May 6, 2014 at 2:56 AM UTC
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