I handed in my homework
Gave it with a nervous smile
the paper damp from sweaty palms,
the waiting was a trial.
Today I got my paper back
from the dreaded Mr Barr
he grinned at me and gave a wink....
along with an A*!
He said I made him chuckle
as he read my little rhyme,
he thought the rhyming clever
and the rhythm quite sublime
He asked me one last question
in the hallway where we met
with deep concern upon his brow
"Did you find your brother yet?"
Now I'm hiding in the bathroom
racing with the lesson bell
quickly writing this wee poem
to let you know my work did well.
Jul 17, 2014
Jul 17, 2014 at 4:18 AM UTC
I handed in my homework
Gave it with a nervous smile
the paper damp from sweaty palms,
the waiting was a trial.
Today I got my paper back
from the dreaded Mr Barr
he grinned at me and gave a wink....
along with an A*!
He said I made him chuckle
as he read my little rhyme,
he thought the rhyming clever
and the rhythm quite sublime
He asked me one last question
in the hallway where we met
with deep concern upon his brow
"Did you find your brother yet?"
Now I'm hiding in the bathroom
racing with the lesson bell
quickly writing this wee poem
to let you know my work did well.
Thankyou to all of you that commented on Pinky Promise, your words really helped my confidence and eased my fear of handing it in. Thankyou!!!!!! :-)
