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M y love is like a red, red rose Y oung with the dew-kissed promises of spring. L aden with unique perfume, O n a slender stalk it blooms V ery near the edge of a sunlit garden, E ndlessly transforming but always the same. I offer you this rose in hopes that S someday fields of them will shine. L oving you turns ugly weeds I nto rare exotic blossoms that K iss the summer breezes with their scent E ven as they wither and turn brown. A bsolute perfection is my love and this red flower. R each out and touch this rose I offer- E very thorn is gentle and not sharp- D o not fear of hurt from it. R ather fill your senses with the joy of it, E ndlessly fresh within your hand, and never D ying, only changing to become more sweet. R eceive this gift I bring to you and O nly let me be that rose S o that my soul lies in your hand and heart for all E ternity. << >>
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Apr 23, 2017
Apr 23, 2017 at 5:37 PM UTC
MY LOVE IS LIKE A RED RED ROSE
M y love is like a red, red rose Y oung with the dew-kissed promises of spring. L aden with unique perfume, O n a slender stalk it blooms V ery near the edge of a sunlit garden, E ndlessly transforming but always the same. I offer you this rose in hopes that S someday fields of them will shine. L oving you turns ugly weeds I nto rare exotic blossoms that K iss the summer breezes with their scent E ven as they wither and turn brown. A bsolute perfection is my love and this red flower. R each out and touch this rose I offer- E very thorn is gentle and not sharp- D o not fear of hurt from it. R ather fill your senses with the joy of it, E ndlessly fresh within your hand, and never D ying, only changing to become more sweet. R eceive this gift I bring to you and O nly let me be that rose S o that my soul lies in your hand and heart for all E ternity. << >>
The title comes from a traditional folk song. The rest of it comes from me.
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Apr 23, 2017
Apr 23, 2017 at 5:37 PM UTC
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