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He wields his hammer    without mercy bring the metal d o w n time and space     e  x  p  a  n  d  i  n  g crushing metal to earth          to vibration to sound my head snaps to the left          vibration through earth                 through atom through drum a fire ignites...a fire BURNS...a fire smolders nostrils flare   apertures contract straining to focus       heart valves pump unnaturally          oxygen is scarce knees weaken and i  s              i                n                   k arms of steel      guide my hips... (keep breathing) strands of gold      brush my neck (open your eyes) kisses so light   turn to a force of nature (by the forgotten gods,               you are beautiful) teeth playfully snap     eyes shine (breathe, woman, breathe) our neurons are mirrored    our pheromones agree now comply...surrender...submit your cape is irrelevant   the crimson does not impress me you do not need it to take flight your armor is useless   i can pierce it simply with a look from my blue eyes what of your hammer, Thor? it is all of what you are; heavy with burden   spinning and light with hope crushing the earth with music raised high to lead           with a steady hand hailing a booming storm     light electrifying be assured - your hammer is your own i do not desire to take what is yours     to smother your light          to limit your branches i only wish to see you grow in strength   in beauty        in music             in light and so i will wait... for the thunder of the hammer    crushing the ground calling me home.
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May 18, 2013
May 18, 2013 at 2:02 AM UTC
The Mighty Thor (or it's not the cape)
He wields his hammer    without mercy bring the metal d o w n time and space     e  x  p  a  n  d  i  n  g crushing metal to earth          to vibration to sound my head snaps to the left          vibration through earth                 through atom through drum a fire ignites...a fire BURNS...a fire smolders nostrils flare   apertures contract straining to focus       heart valves pump unnaturally          oxygen is scarce knees weaken and i  s              i                n                   k arms of steel      guide my hips... (keep breathing) strands of gold      brush my neck (open your eyes) kisses so light   turn to a force of nature (by the forgotten gods,               you are beautiful) teeth playfully snap     eyes shine (breathe, woman, breathe) our neurons are mirrored    our pheromones agree now comply...surrender...submit your cape is irrelevant   the crimson does not impress me you do not need it to take flight your armor is useless   i can pierce it simply with a look from my blue eyes what of your hammer, Thor? it is all of what you are; heavy with burden   spinning and light with hope crushing the earth with music raised high to lead           with a steady hand hailing a booming storm     light electrifying be assured - your hammer is your own i do not desire to take what is yours     to smother your light          to limit your branches i only wish to see you grow in strength   in beauty        in music             in light and so i will wait... for the thunder of the hammer    crushing the ground calling me home.
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May 18, 2013
May 18, 2013 at 2:02 AM UTC
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