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Finally, we spoke of the nature of existence While we lay in bed, sitting up right I looked at you with the type of reflection One could but only presumably perceive   To be A fun house mirror demeanor; All distorted with elongated features, we Are one in the same universal happenings Tonight But never the less, the image shining back Is you No prejudice has been bestowed on you I will not assume that your words are meant for conflict Or that any questions you have - for the sake of argument Respectfully so, I do not intend to ever judge, or deny Your emotional or logical self portrayals     The illusion of separation, the self, this idea of identity It has rotted open-communication at her core This round the decision is clear By riding to the top of the crest Much of the garbage keeping me afloat has sunk And now, at this height I have fully, A three hundred sixty degree view At the next crest, there, in front of me There's an interesting new looking pile Totally enough strength and energy to swim over, too "We do, we have the same core perceptions at our marrow." I exclaimed, pouching my hands up ahead of my brow line, and then in a circle with my right hand swirling about. " And then, there is all of this. Uncharted territory, at this level. If I am in creation, akin to 'it', then why am I doing this, whats the point?" I knew how I felt about the subject But I just needed a witness She was so close, and I so enveloped in topic At one point I couldn't tell the difference Between me, her, or anything in the room I'll leave it at that...
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Feb 28, 2014
Feb 28, 2014 at 4:57 PM UTC
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Finally, we spoke of the nature of existence While we lay in bed, sitting up right I looked at you with the type of reflection One could but only presumably perceive   To be A fun house mirror demeanor; All distorted with elongated features, we Are one in the same universal happenings Tonight But never the less, the image shining back Is you No prejudice has been bestowed on you I will not assume that your words are meant for conflict Or that any questions you have - for the sake of argument Respectfully so, I do not intend to ever judge, or deny Your emotional or logical self portrayals     The illusion of separation, the self, this idea of identity It has rotted open-communication at her core This round the decision is clear By riding to the top of the crest Much of the garbage keeping me afloat has sunk And now, at this height I have fully, A three hundred sixty degree view At the next crest, there, in front of me There's an interesting new looking pile Totally enough strength and energy to swim over, too "We do, we have the same core perceptions at our marrow." I exclaimed, pouching my hands up ahead of my brow line, and then in a circle with my right hand swirling about. " And then, there is all of this. Uncharted territory, at this level. If I am in creation, akin to 'it', then why am I doing this, whats the point?" I knew how I felt about the subject But I just needed a witness She was so close, and I so enveloped in topic At one point I couldn't tell the difference Between me, her, or anything in the room I'll leave it at that...
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Feb 28, 2014
Feb 28, 2014 at 4:57 PM UTC
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