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my parents came to check on me i quickly shut the lights turned off the TV everything was black so they knew I was alright my parents came to check on me i threw the bottles in the trash took out the bags everything was empty so they knew I was alright my parents came to check on me i did all my homework smiled happily everything was normal so they knew I was alright my parents came to check on me i should have told them that my life is gray and everything is not alright
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Mar 24, 2013
Mar 24, 2013 at 11:34 PM UTC
Check on Me (rough draft-give me suggestions
my parents came to check on me i quickly shut the lights turned off the TV everything was black so they knew I was alright my parents came to check on me i threw the bottles in the trash took out the bags everything was empty so they knew I was alright my parents came to check on me i did all my homework smiled happily everything was normal so they knew I was alright my parents came to check on me i should have told them that my life is gray and everything is not alright
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Mar 24, 2013
Mar 24, 2013 at 11:34 PM UTC
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