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i guess most of us were fooled into writing poetry on a great Pavlov canvas, indeed it's almost a pavlov experiment, but in reverse, seeing much makes people salivate less in terms of how rewards are puzzled together for the next ring of the bell / poem, and seeing little makes people salivate more in terms of how little rewards mean, except for the bell ring / poem itself. what is it with our modern world where melancholy used to come naturally to old men, who at the end of life sighed that sigh: everything accomplished, now just a waiting game till my old friend death will come knocking? but now old men become demented, and melancholy has left their orbit and passed into the world of the young - what a strange melancholy this is, this melancholy without that fulfilling sigh: everything accomplished - oh this sigh isn't the sigh of melancholy of old age, it's a sigh of: but so little begun! the sighed sigh of: but so little begun! there was a famous exploration of a theory back in the 19th century when psychiatry began learning humanism, when it was decided that psychiatry could have nothing to do with surgery, and shackles and lobotomies - when it started to become a branch of humanism, akin to lounge fiction books and poetry, and philosophy, no longer the butchering of askew behaviourism - those were the days when the old men were melancholic and the young were demented, premature dementia crew they called them - but given the fact: war is all around for glory and for anything else to don the general's feathered hat and magpie attracting sparkle of uniforms adorned by precious jewels like being thanked for the Battle of the Somme - well the slaughterhouse rather than a battlefield - yes, near Ypres, a little town in Belgium, where they still applaud the "glorious" dead with a trumpet sound at a certain hour each day under an arch - like that trumpet sound of St. Mary's each noon, the hejnał, as the trumpeter was running to the top of the tower to sound the alarm of the spotted mongol horde, yes, back then... circumcised eager warriors... not a single ******** among them to hold them back, circumcision doubly requiring the soft oyster pouch of women ended up making men more daring, more warring... and as is usual with me, a captured moment of digression veering off the original topic... what is it with today's premature depression?
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Mar 10, 2016
Mar 10, 2016 at 8:42 AM UTC
on the peripheries of estrangement
i guess most of us were fooled into writing poetry on a great Pavlov canvas, indeed it's almost a pavlov experiment, but in reverse, seeing much makes people salivate less in terms of how rewards are puzzled together for the next ring of the bell / poem, and seeing little makes people salivate more in terms of how little rewards mean, except for the bell ring / poem itself. what is it with our modern world where melancholy used to come naturally to old men, who at the end of life sighed that sigh: everything accomplished, now just a waiting game till my old friend death will come knocking? but now old men become demented, and melancholy has left their orbit and passed into the world of the young - what a strange melancholy this is, this melancholy without that fulfilling sigh: everything accomplished - oh this sigh isn't the sigh of melancholy of old age, it's a sigh of: but so little begun! the sighed sigh of: but so little begun! there was a famous exploration of a theory back in the 19th century when psychiatry began learning humanism, when it was decided that psychiatry could have nothing to do with surgery, and shackles and lobotomies - when it started to become a branch of humanism, akin to lounge fiction books and poetry, and philosophy, no longer the butchering of askew behaviourism - those were the days when the old men were melancholic and the young were demented, premature dementia crew they called them - but given the fact: war is all around for glory and for anything else to don the general's feathered hat and magpie attracting sparkle of uniforms adorned by precious jewels like being thanked for the Battle of the Somme - well the slaughterhouse rather than a battlefield - yes, near Ypres, a little town in Belgium, where they still applaud the "glorious" dead with a trumpet sound at a certain hour each day under an arch - like that trumpet sound of St. Mary's each noon, the hejnał, as the trumpeter was running to the top of the tower to sound the alarm of the spotted mongol horde, yes, back then... circumcised eager warriors... not a single ******** among them to hold them back, circumcision doubly requiring the soft oyster pouch of women ended up making men more daring, more warring... and as is usual with me, a captured moment of digression veering off the original topic... what is it with today's premature depression?
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Mar 10, 2016
Mar 10, 2016 at 8:42 AM UTC
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