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Growing up I loved the ruins of ancient times, everything from temples, statutes, to stories and paintings. At the age of eighteen my mom took me to Greece and I can't remember a time where I was so excited for my birthday to come. The sun burned my skin, went from porcelain white to candy pink. I visited many museums, climbed up to The Parthenon, even walked near the God of Thunder's temple. Five years later I realize: I am made of ruins too unlike Athens, there is no beauty in my external scars, only shame and regret. I am the only cause of my downfall. I am Hector but at same time my name is also Achilles. And just like the old city, my soul is ancient; too fragile for my body to keep, too heavy for my heart to hold.
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Mar 28, 2025
Mar 28, 2025 at 12:18 PM UTC
Athens
Growing up I loved the ruins of ancient times, everything from temples, statutes, to stories and paintings. At the age of eighteen my mom took me to Greece and I can't remember a time where I was so excited for my birthday to come. The sun burned my skin, went from porcelain white to candy pink. I visited many museums, climbed up to The Parthenon, even walked near the God of Thunder's temple. Five years later I realize: I am made of ruins too unlike Athens, there is no beauty in my external scars, only shame and regret. I am the only cause of my downfall. I am Hector but at same time my name is also Achilles. And just like the old city, my soul is ancient; too fragile for my body to keep, too heavy for my heart to hold.
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23/Non-binary/Spain
Mar 28, 2025
Mar 28, 2025 at 12:18 PM UTC
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