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You are a snake, with many layers. I would peel them all away, Discarding, one by one, Revealing smarting, pinkened skin. Shocked pores gulp alien air Stinging, then relief, At being vulnerable, and bare. In some other ago, before you betrayed me, You flayed me, Left me tender, raw, aching, sore, Trembling, flinching at the kiss of the breeze, The warmth of your breath, But you are still resistant, unwilling to shed. I’ll rip away those doubtskins, Grip you, tear apart hesitation, I need you naked, soul and body bare, I have to know you’re really there.
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Dec 2, 2013
Dec 2, 2013 at 9:21 AM UTC
Flaying You
You are a snake, with many layers. I would peel them all away, Discarding, one by one, Revealing smarting, pinkened skin. Shocked pores gulp alien air Stinging, then relief, At being vulnerable, and bare. In some other ago, before you betrayed me, You flayed me, Left me tender, raw, aching, sore, Trembling, flinching at the kiss of the breeze, The warmth of your breath, But you are still resistant, unwilling to shed. I’ll rip away those doubtskins, Grip you, tear apart hesitation, I need you naked, soul and body bare, I have to know you’re really there.
AmandaIS
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Dec 2, 2013
Dec 2, 2013 at 9:21 AM UTC
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