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She says I'm rude and ridiculous She Says it ain't gonna work So the emotion I'm livin in Is love at its worst I just wanna explode I just wanna burst I fail at this, she seems so hurt She says she's done That she gave me time It hits me like a gun It's sour as lime Nothing ever betters me I bring back her worst memories She's fed up with my presence I'm not her lover, Just a peasant She says I treat her like **** We used to love and be close knit I love when we talk and sit Made her trust go to **** She says 'For me you've done zip' It's making my heart rip I'm just watching her slip My goal is to get a grip Our daughter won't be the glue But her heart will be affected Her I don't want to confuse Cuz it'll always be regretted In my heart her spot is embedded So I never want to say 'it ended'
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Feb 18, 2017
Feb 18, 2017 at 11:00 AM UTC
She said
She says I'm rude and ridiculous She Says it ain't gonna work So the emotion I'm livin in Is love at its worst I just wanna explode I just wanna burst I fail at this, she seems so hurt She says she's done That she gave me time It hits me like a gun It's sour as lime Nothing ever betters me I bring back her worst memories She's fed up with my presence I'm not her lover, Just a peasant She says I treat her like **** We used to love and be close knit I love when we talk and sit Made her trust go to **** She says 'For me you've done zip' It's making my heart rip I'm just watching her slip My goal is to get a grip Our daughter won't be the glue But her heart will be affected Her I don't want to confuse Cuz it'll always be regretted In my heart her spot is embedded So I never want to say 'it ended'
juan-francisco-corteznd
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Feb 18, 2017
Feb 18, 2017 at 11:00 AM UTC
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