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If I gave you the light Would you guard it Hold it tight Would you carry it in the middle of the dark Hold it to continue the spark If I gave you the time Would you waste it Within your mind Meaningless thoughts of the day Wistfully thrown away in the midst of the fray If I gave you devotion Would you leave it For in a vaster ocean For a quotient of a far greater value To bask in the light of another hue If I gave you divine Would you receive it Will you eventually find Actions were purely awkward sustainment In the path of a broken perfectionist attainment If I gave you pride Would you destroy it All worthiness inside Resetting in bottles of placid shame Until remnants of memories can barely be claimed
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Jan 7, 2014
Jan 7, 2014 at 3:27 PM UTC
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If I gave you the light Would you guard it Hold it tight Would you carry it in the middle of the dark Hold it to continue the spark If I gave you the time Would you waste it Within your mind Meaningless thoughts of the day Wistfully thrown away in the midst of the fray If I gave you devotion Would you leave it For in a vaster ocean For a quotient of a far greater value To bask in the light of another hue If I gave you divine Would you receive it Will you eventually find Actions were purely awkward sustainment In the path of a broken perfectionist attainment If I gave you pride Would you destroy it All worthiness inside Resetting in bottles of placid shame Until remnants of memories can barely be claimed
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Jan 7, 2014
Jan 7, 2014 at 3:27 PM UTC
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