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"I don't know how to write I don't know what to say anymore I feel so empty I no longer have a soul Void of any light You could say its like its nighttime inside my soul Only difference is theres no stars or moon To represent better times to come soon Maybe things would've turned out differently if I tried Tried to be better than what I am now A loathsome and troublesome presence So bothersome at times I thought......I would get better Forget this I told you I can't write Come to think of it..... I was never able to do anything right." There's no description of a lovely or dark paradise within his soul He won't describe himself as lost and alone Trapped in some 'dark void' or how he loves someone to the bone All he can say is what he feels which really isn't much... So tell me How to describe what you feel... when there's nothing left to feel anymore
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Oct 4, 2016
Oct 4, 2016 at 11:45 AM UTC
Confused
"I don't know how to write I don't know what to say anymore I feel so empty I no longer have a soul Void of any light You could say its like its nighttime inside my soul Only difference is theres no stars or moon To represent better times to come soon Maybe things would've turned out differently if I tried Tried to be better than what I am now A loathsome and troublesome presence So bothersome at times I thought......I would get better Forget this I told you I can't write Come to think of it..... I was never able to do anything right." There's no description of a lovely or dark paradise within his soul He won't describe himself as lost and alone Trapped in some 'dark void' or how he loves someone to the bone All he can say is what he feels which really isn't much... So tell me How to describe what you feel... when there's nothing left to feel anymore
Tried i guess:-( My mind is always in a shambles, I can never jot down what I'm actually thinking and formulate a piece as complex as a poem but rather into a story.....but theres no harm in trying, is there? :-[
timothy-khumalo-harris
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Oct 4, 2016
Oct 4, 2016 at 11:45 AM UTC
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