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I waited, at times I debated, feeling like a teenager aboot to go on their first date, I had work the next day but didn't care if I had to stay up late, it was going to be the first time I saw you, and nothing was going to stop me, it was an electricity that I couldn't put down , and my breath was gone as if there any need for air, I saw you and I couldn't help but stare, the night was slow but gone to fast, like trying to remember a face from your past, I need you is all I could muster to say, and I won't call tomorrow a day, how could I when I won't be able to see your smile brighter than the sun, so I will keep tonight inside my heart but never oot of sight, I'll say that I still have walls, but that is a lie, Like headlines written in the night sky, of my life, you have become permanent.
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Mar 9, 2014
Mar 9, 2014 at 10:46 PM UTC
Your voice was the thunder that made my legs shake, your smile was the lightning that shocked me to my core
I waited, at times I debated, feeling like a teenager aboot to go on their first date, I had work the next day but didn't care if I had to stay up late, it was going to be the first time I saw you, and nothing was going to stop me, it was an electricity that I couldn't put down , and my breath was gone as if there any need for air, I saw you and I couldn't help but stare, the night was slow but gone to fast, like trying to remember a face from your past, I need you is all I could muster to say, and I won't call tomorrow a day, how could I when I won't be able to see your smile brighter than the sun, so I will keep tonight inside my heart but never oot of sight, I'll say that I still have walls, but that is a lie, Like headlines written in the night sky, of my life, you have become permanent.
It kept posting withoot me wanting it to....its kinda cheesy but i needed to write something.
the-masked-sleepyz
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Mar 9, 2014
Mar 9, 2014 at 10:46 PM UTC
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