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Katie loves gin and the way it makes her act She states her thoughts about the world as if each of them were fact It makes Adam feel                     Like she's the one Because Adams been lost since the day he first found the first pretty girl he made make a pretty sound Her name was Sara                     And they’re still friends Sara liked to move fast and liked to leave even faster until she found the perfect **** who she's dubbed The Master His name is Max                     And he keeps secrets well He only sleeps with women when he's drunk and on the run He's never shared the secret of where he holstered up his gun A pistolero of a man                     Who's name is Tom Who only met with Max when he was mad at his bride Who had a secret of her own of who she sees on the side A therapist named Paul                     Who pretends to listen well Paul likes to drink on the job he calls weighty and finds irony in his favorite patient a little drunk named Katie Whom he's often told                     Should speak her mind So she had a party and told friends to invite friends But once the therapist arrived it began to spell the end Secrets spilled                     And people cried Tom and his wife ended up in a divorce During which he left Max in an attempt to make it work And now Max drinks                     Almost every night He almost always ends up on the couch in Sara's house after putting down his bottle and getting lost in her blouse She tells all her friends                     She thinks she's in love It forces Adam into envy who try's to make something out of lust with a crazy little drinker for whom he could never be enough She's already been asleep                     Wrapped in a doctors arm Who's already unraveled                     This strange ball of yarn
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Aug 22, 2013
Aug 22, 2013 at 3:45 AM UTC
It's A Small World, After All
Katie loves gin and the way it makes her act She states her thoughts about the world as if each of them were fact It makes Adam feel                     Like she's the one Because Adams been lost since the day he first found the first pretty girl he made make a pretty sound Her name was Sara                     And they’re still friends Sara liked to move fast and liked to leave even faster until she found the perfect **** who she's dubbed The Master His name is Max                     And he keeps secrets well He only sleeps with women when he's drunk and on the run He's never shared the secret of where he holstered up his gun A pistolero of a man                     Who's name is Tom Who only met with Max when he was mad at his bride Who had a secret of her own of who she sees on the side A therapist named Paul                     Who pretends to listen well Paul likes to drink on the job he calls weighty and finds irony in his favorite patient a little drunk named Katie Whom he's often told                     Should speak her mind So she had a party and told friends to invite friends But once the therapist arrived it began to spell the end Secrets spilled                     And people cried Tom and his wife ended up in a divorce During which he left Max in an attempt to make it work And now Max drinks                     Almost every night He almost always ends up on the couch in Sara's house after putting down his bottle and getting lost in her blouse She tells all her friends                     She thinks she's in love It forces Adam into envy who try's to make something out of lust with a crazy little drinker for whom he could never be enough She's already been asleep                     Wrapped in a doctors arm Who's already unraveled                     This strange ball of yarn
Sometimes, when I can't fall asleep, I just write whatever comes out. A lot of times these writings get out of hand and kind of silly; this was one of those. The whole story may be a little hard to comprehend without knowing all of whats going on in my head, but there's a lot of drama and character here that was fun to develop. So, even though its not a very good poem from a technical stand point, I had a lot of fun writing this. I'm gunna make it into a movie script or something.
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Aug 22, 2013
Aug 22, 2013 at 3:45 AM UTC
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