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Outside a country cottage, where the road trails off like a song, and the paint of its pebble-dash walls play off the sky's complexion, your indifferent eyes behold the curdling clouds above and scrutinize the strangers under them; the expectations met like a faulty firework firmly mounted in the Earth. In the garden stands a Spaniard perplexed by the novelty of fog stranded on the hillside and the absurdness of it existing outside of a horror movie. In the course of a near imperceptible drizzle, it seemed that the clouds forgot how to float; At other times, elsewhere, a refusal to be so gentle, to became fused with other things, to be born from the seepage of smoke of more than a million chimneys, some slink home through it holding hand-cranked lamps, others: smaller, older, wrapped in white sheets, cough up a whole city. But we are not there, we are outside this worn-out cottage, where all the white cats have blue eyes, where a bike rests and rusts on an oak tree, where incredibility is murmured   in hushed tones of veiled dialect, where the conversation tapers off like a half-learned hymn. We amble on in.
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Sep 28, 2023
Sep 28, 2023 at 8:09 PM UTC
Pea Soup Fog
Outside a country cottage, where the road trails off like a song, and the paint of its pebble-dash walls play off the sky's complexion, your indifferent eyes behold the curdling clouds above and scrutinize the strangers under them; the expectations met like a faulty firework firmly mounted in the Earth. In the garden stands a Spaniard perplexed by the novelty of fog stranded on the hillside and the absurdness of it existing outside of a horror movie. In the course of a near imperceptible drizzle, it seemed that the clouds forgot how to float; At other times, elsewhere, a refusal to be so gentle, to became fused with other things, to be born from the seepage of smoke of more than a million chimneys, some slink home through it holding hand-cranked lamps, others: smaller, older, wrapped in white sheets, cough up a whole city. But we are not there, we are outside this worn-out cottage, where all the white cats have blue eyes, where a bike rests and rusts on an oak tree, where incredibility is murmured   in hushed tones of veiled dialect, where the conversation tapers off like a half-learned hymn. We amble on in.
jamie-f-nugent
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28/M/Ireland
Sep 28, 2023
Sep 28, 2023 at 8:09 PM UTC
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