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Intimately ******

It's time, I think

I'm ready?

How do I know for sure?

Laying on this bed with

emotions flowing through my mind;

What if I'm not ready?

A long breath fills up my

mouth as I realized what I

wanted to do.

"Let's do it." I said.

 

Did I just say that out loud?

I started to tremble,

scared of the pain, the pleasure,

the thought of it.

I started to feel his touch,

as he went straight to it.

Kissing me softly, I feel his

warmth, tingling my senses.

What is this feeling?

Why am I acting up?

Still scared but not wanting

it to stop.

 

The slow, soft feeling

started to increase rapidly,

as I felt his kiss shifting

all over my body.

Lick, the feeling of licking,

excited me.

It started to sting my body

marking its place

as I felt the fading

of the mist it left on

my smooth skin.

I lay there taking in the pleasures

he fulfilled,

the warmth of his sweet lips.

 

What is happening?

I started to breathe with

such force as he started

to feel the mist with

his fingers.

Slowly structuring my body

with his hand, his touch.

I felt imprisoned by his touch

and as I took in his delicious scent,

I was paralyzed once more.

A prisoner of my own heart

I let him take over me,

caressing me and pleasuring me

in ways that I never thought possible.

 

My heart, now beating out of my chest

I knew what was next or so i thought;

I tried to prepare myself mentally

taking deep breaths, somewhat panting.

Panting as i close my eyes,

squeezing it, as questions flowed

in my mind.

What will it feel like?

How will i react..

I already couldnt control myself,

feeling weak all over,

as he had me under his spell,

under his control.

What is happening?

 

There was no turning back now

I had already dug myself in way too deep;

I decided i'd take control,

as our lips danced our positions changed

I was the one on top now.

I had the power and as his eyes rolled back

I knew that it was satisfying.

A triumph of song started to

come through our voices,

louder and louder it gradually

formed.

Reacting in a way i never thought

I would be able to do.

The reflexes i had,

resulted in a new person in me.

Ssassy and passionate it indeed was.

Singing through the movement of

the wind.

 

I felt as though our hearts were now beating as one,

our souls connected through this intimate action

it was perfect, beautiful and amazing beyond words

I didn't want it to end, we were now in our own world

nothing else mattered, it was just me and him

two bodies, two hearts, intwined together to fuse

the perfect passion, the perfect love.

A love forming into an excitement

a feeling of pressure, and great pleasure

it yanked me out of my mind

becoming loose and feeling something,

something weird, something I've never felt before

faster, we moved, the wind blowing through

the flow.

What was entering my system, what has my body

engaged in creating.

 

With no control my body started asking

for more, more pleasure,

as it once more increased its speed.

our songs turning into screams now,

as the pressure was getting too much.

Too much for both of us, too much

to handle in one gesture.

"I think it's coming." he said

coming!? what's coming?

I started to panic,

what am i supposed to do?

But still, my body didnt want to stop,

it was ready for it,

but my mind was still frightened.

He started to concentrate on the movement,

pulling my body onto his, forcing me,

exciting me.

 

He started to growl, realizing

that it was coming.

I prepared myself as he pulled me

once more, with great pressure,

it got me to a surprise, as he held me tight

having the flow gradually separating in me.

We collapsed, side by side, breathing hard

in one sound.

 

We were both breathless but satisfied.

We lay there, without a single word leaving our lips

we knew that it was the beginning of forever

as we lay there, eternity seemed to pass over us

nestling my head into his neck

I breathed in his scent once more

and whispered soft words into his ear

this was it, he was the one

and then we fell asleep, embraced in eachothers arms.

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Published
Apr 29, 2010
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*Co-writer: Rosa Lin.

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