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Your release was like seeing The details of leaves For the very first time. Before, I only saw in watercolors, A pretty image diluted in Mistakes easily erased. So perfect was your work Full of falsified fantasies of our future Everyone but me could see The details of our leaves. Time would reveal The fruit of your labors As they soured into acid that ate away The concealed cracks of your character. Now, the flaws are on full display, Unfiltered, unchanged. Because of you, I now see The details of our leaves.
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May 22, 2018
May 22, 2018 at 11:33 PM UTC
Seeing in Watercolors
Your release was like seeing The details of leaves For the very first time. Before, I only saw in watercolors, A pretty image diluted in Mistakes easily erased. So perfect was your work Full of falsified fantasies of our future Everyone but me could see The details of our leaves. Time would reveal The fruit of your labors As they soured into acid that ate away The concealed cracks of your character. Now, the flaws are on full display, Unfiltered, unchanged. Because of you, I now see The details of our leaves.
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20/F/mississippi
May 22, 2018
May 22, 2018 at 11:33 PM UTC
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