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Look how far we’ve come. I thank God for the injustices, the smarting wounds, Infirmities of the soul; the pains of the past magnify the high that your love, that your life supplies. You love the stitching, the commonly-overlooked, the embroidery, all the parts of me that have gathered dust. You find beauty in my tatters and rags, In the me admirers shy from. Look how far we’ve come, already. You light me, you give me rhythm, passion and dynamism. You’re a song I never thought I’d dance to; a color I’ve never painted with, an octave I never thought I’d reach. I want you to know that I understand, that I admire your mind. I appreciate your heart. You are who I’ll fight for, believe in, and to whom I’d give my last. I’ve found a friend in you, a striking reflection of God’s patience, passion, of His love. Your eyes are full of thought and light; your smiles are full of love and life. I see your strife and sacrifice, yet you stay strong enough. You manage to save some strength for me. Life erodes us, corrodes gentleness, ices hearts; after everything you’ve seen, I never tell you when to hold me, when to listen, to love me. I’m growing in fertile soil now, upward and under watchful eyes, genuine devotion. We’re gonna make it— I see how far we’ve come; I see how far we’ll go.
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Sep 27, 2011
Sep 27, 2011 at 3:32 PM UTC
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Look how far we’ve come. I thank God for the injustices, the smarting wounds, Infirmities of the soul; the pains of the past magnify the high that your love, that your life supplies. You love the stitching, the commonly-overlooked, the embroidery, all the parts of me that have gathered dust. You find beauty in my tatters and rags, In the me admirers shy from. Look how far we’ve come, already. You light me, you give me rhythm, passion and dynamism. You’re a song I never thought I’d dance to; a color I’ve never painted with, an octave I never thought I’d reach. I want you to know that I understand, that I admire your mind. I appreciate your heart. You are who I’ll fight for, believe in, and to whom I’d give my last. I’ve found a friend in you, a striking reflection of God’s patience, passion, of His love. Your eyes are full of thought and light; your smiles are full of love and life. I see your strife and sacrifice, yet you stay strong enough. You manage to save some strength for me. Life erodes us, corrodes gentleness, ices hearts; after everything you’ve seen, I never tell you when to hold me, when to listen, to love me. I’m growing in fertile soil now, upward and under watchful eyes, genuine devotion. We’re gonna make it— I see how far we’ve come; I see how far we’ll go.
I never thought I'd see the day I could have a man of God for my own, to have a relationship that is Christ-centered and focused. Something raw and real.
rhianna-oreilly
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Sep 27, 2011
Sep 27, 2011 at 3:32 PM UTC
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