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I never expected you to come. As I flail away in hopeless drinks. You lift my head as I pass out And rested it on your shoulder. And I mumbled nothingness. I held my breath As I felt your warm presence. Gentle skin dried my tears While I withered away. I could hear your still heart Washed away, heaving its last life. And, just as I had wake, You already walked out the door. I couldn’t ask you to stay, Knowing I’d stain your beautiful nature. So I’ll reminisce about it instead, poorly. Of course.
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Jan 25
Jan 25, 2026 at 8:50 AM UTC
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I never expected you to come. As I flail away in hopeless drinks. You lift my head as I pass out And rested it on your shoulder. And I mumbled nothingness. I held my breath As I felt your warm presence. Gentle skin dried my tears While I withered away. I could hear your still heart Washed away, heaving its last life. And, just as I had wake, You already walked out the door. I couldn’t ask you to stay, Knowing I’d stain your beautiful nature. So I’ll reminisce about it instead, poorly. Of course.
I was given a prompt to write what a drunk person would feel in one of their drinking sessions.
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Jan 25
Jan 25, 2026 at 8:50 AM UTC
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