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*I wrote this in November and was not happy with it; " I heard passion on the streets of New York City the sea foam of the sky hanging on the Persian shield watching over us the gloaming brings retrospect the healthy green pendant of the six train matches the bushes in the square in Little Ukraine it is dark we bounce as we step I know when I move I will be on my own she tells me she hears yelling. is it happy exclamation or anger I don't know. I say. I don't know"* 12/25/2016 On the sidestreets of Little Ukraine men smoked cigarettes and said pryvit and KNL said it's because you look slavic but i'm pennsylvania dutch! i laugh shoofly pie, not sochniki off the 33rd street stop and it was getting to be dark out the sky heliotrope and true blue I heard a noise did you hear that too? I say to her It was angry or happy? she asks, more like states I don't know, all i said. *But it's passion. It's passion. On the streets of new york city. That would make a good poem, right?*
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Dec 25, 2016
Dec 25, 2016 at 2:47 PM UTC
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*I wrote this in November and was not happy with it; " I heard passion on the streets of New York City the sea foam of the sky hanging on the Persian shield watching over us the gloaming brings retrospect the healthy green pendant of the six train matches the bushes in the square in Little Ukraine it is dark we bounce as we step I know when I move I will be on my own she tells me she hears yelling. is it happy exclamation or anger I don't know. I say. I don't know"* 12/25/2016 On the sidestreets of Little Ukraine men smoked cigarettes and said pryvit and KNL said it's because you look slavic but i'm pennsylvania dutch! i laugh shoofly pie, not sochniki off the 33rd street stop and it was getting to be dark out the sky heliotrope and true blue I heard a noise did you hear that too? I say to her It was angry or happy? she asks, more like states I don't know, all i said. *But it's passion. It's passion. On the streets of new york city. That would make a good poem, right?*
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Dec 25, 2016
Dec 25, 2016 at 2:47 PM UTC
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