As punctuation goes
it pauses me, I know
simple words should flow
just like melting snow
Every one reminds
thought, that's left behind
the pieces ill defined
as remnants in my mind
I'll strive to keep it down
the comma's bouncing round
mentally run aground
and mechanically unsound
A crutch I've over used
and yes, totally abused
so you can be amused
as guilty, the accused
Jan 10, 2018
Jan 10, 2018 at 3:00 PM UTC
As punctuation goes
it pauses me, I know
simple words should flow
just like melting snow
Every one reminds
thought, that's left behind
the pieces ill defined
as remnants in my mind
I'll strive to keep it down
the comma's bouncing round
mentally run aground
and mechanically unsound
A crutch I've over used
and yes, totally abused
so you can be amused
as guilty, the accused
No slight meant too Johnny Noir, he's right, I use WAY TOO **** MANY commas!
But, they are my friends, reminding me that even thought is not a constant flow, but a stuttering, of firing synapses. :)
Comma comma comma comma comma
comedian
come and go
they come and go-ooooo
;D
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