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In an instant The vulnerable confidence within escaped... Thud - As I cracked my head against the concrete. For the first time            in a long time, I thought It was all over. I reached to the back Expecting the fragile shell split; The shell that holds my brain But nothing. Suddenly my left side went numb, tingled And returned to leave only what I can describe As pins n' needled heated to 100 degrees Prior to their attack. They ran from shoulder to my 3 middle fingers. 5 minutes now I sit cross legged on the concrete. With fire in my fingers I press to push myself up, I'm dizzy. I sit again for a while. Nerve damage. Should heal? I hope... ******* BMX
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Jul 15, 2015
Jul 15, 2015 at 8:31 PM UTC
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In an instant The vulnerable confidence within escaped... Thud - As I cracked my head against the concrete. For the first time            in a long time, I thought It was all over. I reached to the back Expecting the fragile shell split; The shell that holds my brain But nothing. Suddenly my left side went numb, tingled And returned to leave only what I can describe As pins n' needled heated to 100 degrees Prior to their attack. They ran from shoulder to my 3 middle fingers. 5 minutes now I sit cross legged on the concrete. With fire in my fingers I press to push myself up, I'm dizzy. I sit again for a while. Nerve damage. Should heal? I hope... ******* BMX
Just a quick write with no edit, bit of a blog really I suppose after testing my bmx after a rebuild. Bike was lighter than expected and fell straight back on the back of my head. For a second I truly thought it was all over!
#story#advice#idiot
Laniatus
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Laniatus
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Jul 15, 2015
Jul 15, 2015 at 8:31 PM UTC
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