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i visited you on a Saturday and i didn't know        what to expect. you wore a blue sundress that afternoon, and we stepped into the shade of a weeping willow. we laid and talked,                     only talked and held hands. after a while we walked back to   where you sleep                     and  talked again. we talked and then my love for you grew   as a young man's love will naturally grow when he is in the arms of his love,   when he is in the arms of love.                    we kissed and such a sweetness i found! a sweetness as only young ones know when   tasting love for the first time came from                      your mouth! my God! your mouth... and then we fell,                      both of us this time,   fell into something we did not understand,                      but knew just the same! we had been waiting,                      one for the other... to be complete   we gave in to what we could only feel. nothing we could see or had heard of could have                      helped us learn this bravery   against youth. and so we fell,                            blindly, expectantly, knowing only that   my shadow, my highest,                      my heartbeat would always be yours:   my first, my all-time, my yellow;                      walk with me again...
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Jan 17, 2014
Jan 17, 2014 at 3:19 PM UTC
once upon a saturday
i visited you on a Saturday and i didn't know        what to expect. you wore a blue sundress that afternoon, and we stepped into the shade of a weeping willow. we laid and talked,                     only talked and held hands. after a while we walked back to   where you sleep                     and  talked again. we talked and then my love for you grew   as a young man's love will naturally grow when he is in the arms of his love,   when he is in the arms of love.                    we kissed and such a sweetness i found! a sweetness as only young ones know when   tasting love for the first time came from                      your mouth! my God! your mouth... and then we fell,                      both of us this time,   fell into something we did not understand,                      but knew just the same! we had been waiting,                      one for the other... to be complete   we gave in to what we could only feel. nothing we could see or had heard of could have                      helped us learn this bravery   against youth. and so we fell,                            blindly, expectantly, knowing only that   my shadow, my highest,                      my heartbeat would always be yours:   my first, my all-time, my yellow;                      walk with me again...
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Jan 17, 2014
Jan 17, 2014 at 3:19 PM UTC
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