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The doors are locked, shades drawn. No signs of life stirring inside. Out on the porch, strike the knocker— no one answers, as if someone’s died. I recall the hinges swung wide open, the hostess there waiting, each room lit and alive. She must’ve moved on, neglecting to tell me— or, perhaps, couldn’t manage a goodbye Now I must find myself elsewhere; the proprietress left me an empty sky. In the end, I wasn’t kin, just a boarder— privileges suspended, a house closed tight.          —•0•—
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Nov 20, 2025
Nov 20, 2025 at 10:19 AM UTC
A House Closed Tight
The doors are locked, shades drawn. No signs of life stirring inside. Out on the porch, strike the knocker— no one answers, as if someone’s died. I recall the hinges swung wide open, the hostess there waiting, each room lit and alive. She must’ve moved on, neglecting to tell me— or, perhaps, couldn’t manage a goodbye Now I must find myself elsewhere; the proprietress left me an empty sky. In the end, I wasn’t kin, just a boarder— privileges suspended, a house closed tight.          —•0•—
Feelings of abandonment, emotional closure, and profound loneliness.
david-anthony-carrillo
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Nov 20, 2025
Nov 20, 2025 at 10:19 AM UTC
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