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Once upon a concrete fairytale There lived, and loved, a girl With eyes of cuts of sky And lips of roses red. She aimed to be kind, And she aspired to be perfect, And though it's what you saw She often fell short, Like a shot of whiskey; This lovely, golden girl. If she so wished, The stars would have been her hairnet, The midnight ink her silent gown, And suitors the slippers that caressed her feet, The ones she walked all over. She was described as Spring; as laughter in liquid form To be drank in slowly; as ice On the spine - so revitalizing; Like your future, Like everything you wanted. But she didn't want Any part of herself. She found her words too sweet, Her beliefs too strong, She found her own life and song too stifling. And her Prince was a long time coming. And you watched her wither, Eat poison apples, and wake herself up, You watched her become still, and quiet, With the lonely that froze her Out of her own heart. And so you, her jailer, with your watchful stare, Took pity, and, releasing her, From her self made chains, You told her to cut her hair, to dress different, To do anything to reanimate her mind. You gave her the key. And she used it. Then she threw it out the tower, So it could never again enslave her, And then she jumped after it. Chasing sweet, unparalleled freedom. And she lived happily ever after In the hearts and minds of men. No puppet strings attached.
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Apr 13, 2013
Apr 13, 2013 at 6:33 PM UTC
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Once upon a concrete fairytale There lived, and loved, a girl With eyes of cuts of sky And lips of roses red. She aimed to be kind, And she aspired to be perfect, And though it's what you saw She often fell short, Like a shot of whiskey; This lovely, golden girl. If she so wished, The stars would have been her hairnet, The midnight ink her silent gown, And suitors the slippers that caressed her feet, The ones she walked all over. She was described as Spring; as laughter in liquid form To be drank in slowly; as ice On the spine - so revitalizing; Like your future, Like everything you wanted. But she didn't want Any part of herself. She found her words too sweet, Her beliefs too strong, She found her own life and song too stifling. And her Prince was a long time coming. And you watched her wither, Eat poison apples, and wake herself up, You watched her become still, and quiet, With the lonely that froze her Out of her own heart. And so you, her jailer, with your watchful stare, Took pity, and, releasing her, From her self made chains, You told her to cut her hair, to dress different, To do anything to reanimate her mind. You gave her the key. And she used it. Then she threw it out the tower, So it could never again enslave her, And then she jumped after it. Chasing sweet, unparalleled freedom. And she lived happily ever after In the hearts and minds of men. No puppet strings attached.
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Apr 13, 2013
Apr 13, 2013 at 6:33 PM UTC
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