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The cigarette burns, whiskey half-empty, I stare at the ceiling— my body frozen, like time itself has died. Maybe if I stare long enough, you’ll walk through that door, say, “It’s not your fault,” and we’ll hug, but the silence cuts through, and you’re already gone. Maybe I should have kept quiet, my words too heavy for you to bear. Your foot told me so, and your hands agreed, gripping the wheel, not steering, but letting go. I wish I could wipe your tears, hold your shattered heart and stop the screaming, but it’s too late. So you accelerate, and I’m left in this stillness, a wreck that never crashed.
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Feb 1, 2025
Feb 1, 2025 at 5:34 PM UTC
Chevy Heart
The cigarette burns, whiskey half-empty, I stare at the ceiling— my body frozen, like time itself has died. Maybe if I stare long enough, you’ll walk through that door, say, “It’s not your fault,” and we’ll hug, but the silence cuts through, and you’re already gone. Maybe I should have kept quiet, my words too heavy for you to bear. Your foot told me so, and your hands agreed, gripping the wheel, not steering, but letting go. I wish I could wipe your tears, hold your shattered heart and stop the screaming, but it’s too late. So you accelerate, and I’m left in this stillness, a wreck that never crashed.
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Feb 1, 2025
Feb 1, 2025 at 5:34 PM UTC
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