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••• "on some days, I love you more than others," an early morning uh oh IROLO (instantly regretted out loud observation), of the potentially ruinous kind, spoken with malice towards none, *and obviously, no forethought,* firmly but modestly muttered over the modestly rumpled courtroom battlefield of sheets, newsprint, mugs and Bocelli on low smockingly, (a slow spreading smile of mock), she turns her gaze upon the presumed guilty, querulous, soon-to-be-ruined ruminator (me), and asks with disdainful derisive decisiveness is your first cuppa too hot darling? has your uncommon sense of non-sense been burnt? t'is true I reply, I feel the burn! for am I not sworn to tell the whole heated truth and nothing but? my love for you is simply a mathematical additive, progression series every new day I love you is forever a mighty mite more than the prior, a smudged smidge of a penciled line, taller than the higher higher notated upon ancient yesterday's doorpost ergo, ip so factoid, and therefore, by definition on some days I love you more than others     ••• p.s. never have conversations like this in the presence of within-reach newspapers, for they be easy rolled and revised into fearsome weaponry, suitably for handy smacking"*
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Feb 6, 2016
Feb 6, 2016 at 4:46 PM UTC
on some days, I love you more than others
••• "on some days, I love you more than others," an early morning uh oh IROLO (instantly regretted out loud observation), of the potentially ruinous kind, spoken with malice towards none, *and obviously, no forethought,* firmly but modestly muttered over the modestly rumpled courtroom battlefield of sheets, newsprint, mugs and Bocelli on low smockingly, (a slow spreading smile of mock), she turns her gaze upon the presumed guilty, querulous, soon-to-be-ruined ruminator (me), and asks with disdainful derisive decisiveness is your first cuppa too hot darling? has your uncommon sense of non-sense been burnt? t'is true I reply, I feel the burn! for am I not sworn to tell the whole heated truth and nothing but? my love for you is simply a mathematical additive, progression series every new day I love you is forever a mighty mite more than the prior, a smudged smidge of a penciled line, taller than the higher higher notated upon ancient yesterday's doorpost ergo, ip so factoid, and therefore, by definition on some days I love you more than others     ••• p.s. never have conversations like this in the presence of within-reach newspapers, for they be easy rolled and revised into fearsome weaponry, suitably for handy smacking"*
two six sixteen eight fifty one am
nat-lipstadt
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99/M/NYC/Lippstadt/Kraków
Feb 6, 2016
Feb 6, 2016 at 4:46 PM UTC
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