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I wanted to hold your face, to stare into your eyes and feel alive, but it was the roughest surface I had ever known beneath my palm. For there was a permanent earth upon it rift valleys, craters, nation borders carved deep. And your eyes void like the dark, holding nothing but haunted things still fighting to survive. I wanted to trace your chest, map it anew for myself, but I found handprints burnt in red, permanent. Shallow, yet never filled, marks that refused to leave, clinging like memory after war. So I asked you to turn, to hold you from behind but what I saw there was worse than what you showed me. Claw marks deep enough to make a wolf envious. Claims etched in flesh lust, hunger, betrayal spelled out in silence. A tale as old as time, never spoken aloud. I turned you back, looked at your hands cleaned, yet never clean. Rough. Blood-worn. Nails crooked like tree roots. Hands that fix, yet never heal. Hands that carry mess, but are never freed from it. And though I am inexperienced, I was curious to know you but tell me, would loving you be twice the labor for half the truth? Did you choose me for my softness, or were you searching for another quiet ruin? You call yourself a builder, yet you do not know your tools. So certain in your truth, you forgot it takes two to hold it steady. And through your red-tinted sight, you refused to see. I refuse to build a man so I refuse you. You reach to be my hero, but I choose to be my own. This is not rebellion I simply lack the desire to fix what refuses repair. Your silence toward yourself was the loudest warning. And I am grateful it was the first thing I saw. I choose me without your permission. Like a bird that never needed to ask before it flew. I do not hate you. I simply see you and that is enough. Some stories are not meant to be rewritten, only witnessed… and gently left behind. So I release you to the version of yourself you refuse to outgrow and I walk forward, lighter than I found you.
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Mar 23
Mar 23, 2026 at 8:45 AM UTC
The Geography of You
I wanted to hold your face, to stare into your eyes and feel alive, but it was the roughest surface I had ever known beneath my palm. For there was a permanent earth upon it rift valleys, craters, nation borders carved deep. And your eyes void like the dark, holding nothing but haunted things still fighting to survive. I wanted to trace your chest, map it anew for myself, but I found handprints burnt in red, permanent. Shallow, yet never filled, marks that refused to leave, clinging like memory after war. So I asked you to turn, to hold you from behind but what I saw there was worse than what you showed me. Claw marks deep enough to make a wolf envious. Claims etched in flesh lust, hunger, betrayal spelled out in silence. A tale as old as time, never spoken aloud. I turned you back, looked at your hands cleaned, yet never clean. Rough. Blood-worn. Nails crooked like tree roots. Hands that fix, yet never heal. Hands that carry mess, but are never freed from it. And though I am inexperienced, I was curious to know you but tell me, would loving you be twice the labor for half the truth? Did you choose me for my softness, or were you searching for another quiet ruin? You call yourself a builder, yet you do not know your tools. So certain in your truth, you forgot it takes two to hold it steady. And through your red-tinted sight, you refused to see. I refuse to build a man so I refuse you. You reach to be my hero, but I choose to be my own. This is not rebellion I simply lack the desire to fix what refuses repair. Your silence toward yourself was the loudest warning. And I am grateful it was the first thing I saw. I choose me without your permission. Like a bird that never needed to ask before it flew. I do not hate you. I simply see you and that is enough. Some stories are not meant to be rewritten, only witnessed… and gently left behind. So I release you to the version of yourself you refuse to outgrow and I walk forward, lighter than I found you.
#ScarsThatSpeak#
BintiNox
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Mar 23
Mar 23, 2026 at 8:45 AM UTC
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