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You walked with Janice to Baldwin’s the Herbalist at the corner of Elephant and Walworth Road she wore her blue patterned dress and red beret and white socks and red sandals and in her small purse she had money her gran gave her to buy sarsaparilla in a half pint glass and you in your cowboy shirt and jeans and plimsolls with your holster and six shooter in the belt around your waist and clutching money your mother’d given you for doing a few chores Gran would never let me go on my own Janice said but when I said you were going Gran said all right but no sweets they rot your teeth I like the liquorice sticks you can buy there you said they make your teeth white or so my mum said Janice looked at your gun in the holster and said you can protect me from outlaws with your gun sure you replied she smelt of lavender and toothpaste from tins and she moved nearer to you and her arm touched yours as you walked along here we are she said and opened the door of Baldwin’s and you both went in and went to the counter and asked the man for two half pints of sarsaparilla and when he poured them and you each paid him you stood by the window with your glasses and sipped and looked at the passing traffic and people you feeling like Wyatt Earp in the saloon and Janice looking out as if she feared outlaws would be coming pretty soon.
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Jul 29, 2012
Jul 29, 2012 at 3:02 PM UTC
SARSPARILLA AND JANICE AND YOU.
You walked with Janice to Baldwin’s the Herbalist at the corner of Elephant and Walworth Road she wore her blue patterned dress and red beret and white socks and red sandals and in her small purse she had money her gran gave her to buy sarsaparilla in a half pint glass and you in your cowboy shirt and jeans and plimsolls with your holster and six shooter in the belt around your waist and clutching money your mother’d given you for doing a few chores Gran would never let me go on my own Janice said but when I said you were going Gran said all right but no sweets they rot your teeth I like the liquorice sticks you can buy there you said they make your teeth white or so my mum said Janice looked at your gun in the holster and said you can protect me from outlaws with your gun sure you replied she smelt of lavender and toothpaste from tins and she moved nearer to you and her arm touched yours as you walked along here we are she said and opened the door of Baldwin’s and you both went in and went to the counter and asked the man for two half pints of sarsaparilla and when he poured them and you each paid him you stood by the window with your glasses and sipped and looked at the passing traffic and people you feeling like Wyatt Earp in the saloon and Janice looking out as if she feared outlaws would be coming pretty soon.
terry-collett
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Jul 29, 2012
Jul 29, 2012 at 3:02 PM UTC
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