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Insipid darkness is no better womb for thoughts. Decent thoughts, maybe good GREAT thoughts. Thoughts that will flow like the lava of imported electricity not-but-should-be circulating in Gaborone's veiny grid. But who cares? Well, okay, your mother, now swearing at the singed-black TV screen (she's missed her daily soap). Mother Darkness breeds thinkers. Tell me, in the scramble for your cellphone flashlight, did you find your inner Plato? Ah, no, you surely became a lightbulb, humming with the shocks of unwritten words. It is these minutes of lightless inertia when it's best to tap your swollen top instead of lighting a candle. See, sun rays and tube lights dull the finish of ideas; corporation-induced darkness provides more suitable conditions. So you must tap the glass globe on your shoulders and feel, yes, feel the grey filament within, buzzzzzzzz Electricity. Edison's 'Eureka!' finally happening, as all 'Eurekas!' do, in (literally) colourless mundane. (Note to self: Write a thank-you email to that pathetic power corporation for your rebirth as a glow) Thoughts. Thoughts and thoughts, thoughts, thoughts.                  thoughts,    thoughts, thoughts and                               thoughts, coming in viscous gallops, extra voltage baby, thoughts! Thoughts, thoughts, thoughts, IDEA. You are no longer living! You exist as shards of yes, one GREAT whole, one...brace-taste the word now... idea. You are glimmers of something greater. You are hot charges of energy your country failed to harness. Sparked at the flick of a lazy corporation's switch: they cut the power which cut the flow in the varicose veins of Gaborone which cut your bedroom's plastic brightness which cut the bored-contented moment you were wallowing in which cut your breath (still-half-scared of the dark, you) which cut the blood flow to your grey matter which cut the oxygen supply, replaced the fuel with electricity and then you could think. Thoughts and   thoughts and what will you do with them? If you dare the sun's brilliance, you might land up as some poor Icarus; if you wait a half-volt longer, I'm afraid the fuse will blow, madam and your mother cannot comprehend these blue-light shocks, please find a paper and a pen immediately. Ah. So the electricity must, after all, power something. And in the crackling dash to eke out your blow-blaze-brim-burn words onto something that will last longer than today's ration of blackness, the power comes back. Mind chars into itself. Snuffed too soon, you pathetic power corporation, why did you put me out like that? Your mother turns to you and mutters 'Thank God.'
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Aug 25, 2015
Aug 25, 2015 at 4:23 AM UTC
Power Cut
Insipid darkness is no better womb for thoughts. Decent thoughts, maybe good GREAT thoughts. Thoughts that will flow like the lava of imported electricity not-but-should-be circulating in Gaborone's veiny grid. But who cares? Well, okay, your mother, now swearing at the singed-black TV screen (she's missed her daily soap). Mother Darkness breeds thinkers. Tell me, in the scramble for your cellphone flashlight, did you find your inner Plato? Ah, no, you surely became a lightbulb, humming with the shocks of unwritten words. It is these minutes of lightless inertia when it's best to tap your swollen top instead of lighting a candle. See, sun rays and tube lights dull the finish of ideas; corporation-induced darkness provides more suitable conditions. So you must tap the glass globe on your shoulders and feel, yes, feel the grey filament within, buzzzzzzzz Electricity. Edison's 'Eureka!' finally happening, as all 'Eurekas!' do, in (literally) colourless mundane. (Note to self: Write a thank-you email to that pathetic power corporation for your rebirth as a glow) Thoughts. Thoughts and thoughts, thoughts, thoughts.                  thoughts,    thoughts, thoughts and                               thoughts, coming in viscous gallops, extra voltage baby, thoughts! Thoughts, thoughts, thoughts, IDEA. You are no longer living! You exist as shards of yes, one GREAT whole, one...brace-taste the word now... idea. You are glimmers of something greater. You are hot charges of energy your country failed to harness. Sparked at the flick of a lazy corporation's switch: they cut the power which cut the flow in the varicose veins of Gaborone which cut your bedroom's plastic brightness which cut the bored-contented moment you were wallowing in which cut your breath (still-half-scared of the dark, you) which cut the blood flow to your grey matter which cut the oxygen supply, replaced the fuel with electricity and then you could think. Thoughts and   thoughts and what will you do with them? If you dare the sun's brilliance, you might land up as some poor Icarus; if you wait a half-volt longer, I'm afraid the fuse will blow, madam and your mother cannot comprehend these blue-light shocks, please find a paper and a pen immediately. Ah. So the electricity must, after all, power something. And in the crackling dash to eke out your blow-blaze-brim-burn words onto something that will last longer than today's ration of blackness, the power comes back. Mind chars into itself. Snuffed too soon, you pathetic power corporation, why did you put me out like that? Your mother turns to you and mutters 'Thank God.'
This poem has a second meaning too, if you bother to think about it. Maybe sit in the darkness to figure it out?
vamika
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Aug 25, 2015
Aug 25, 2015 at 4:23 AM UTC
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