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When we are sick Our body suddenly appears as a conscience Creating unease and pain A burden uncontrollable yet much thought about The realization of its materiality And the existence of the physical becomes more clearer The mind and body separates into a two winged subject As both separate and intimate existence One that depends on the other and vice versa This new rythmic thoughts go on. A body, a presence is felt for the first time.
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Jan 27, 2016
Jan 27, 2016 at 10:38 AM UTC
Think body?
When we are sick Our body suddenly appears as a conscience Creating unease and pain A burden uncontrollable yet much thought about The realization of its materiality And the existence of the physical becomes more clearer The mind and body separates into a two winged subject As both separate and intimate existence One that depends on the other and vice versa This new rythmic thoughts go on. A body, a presence is felt for the first time.
This conscience of the body awakens in us only when we are totally or partially sick.It spreads like a pain and for the first time realise we exist with our bodies which we take for granted.
jasmine-fernandez
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Jan 27, 2016
Jan 27, 2016 at 10:38 AM UTC
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