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As I gaze at the cityscape from atop this tall roof, I can't help but feel ignited, a fulfilled desire. "From up here the city lights burn, like a thousand miles of fire." And suddenly I forget why I came to the roof, I am only concerned with absorbing the moment. My soul drinks up the occasion with the thirst of a lifetime craving, so then it went. The bliss, the fire, the ecstasy, the moment... It was only. One. Moment. before it slipped away. For a high is not a high without a low, and it is the low we experience day to day.
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Jan 14, 2014
Jan 14, 2014 at 11:26 PM UTC
Fire Into My Soul
As I gaze at the cityscape from atop this tall roof, I can't help but feel ignited, a fulfilled desire. "From up here the city lights burn, like a thousand miles of fire." And suddenly I forget why I came to the roof, I am only concerned with absorbing the moment. My soul drinks up the occasion with the thirst of a lifetime craving, so then it went. The bliss, the fire, the ecstasy, the moment... It was only. One. Moment. before it slipped away. For a high is not a high without a low, and it is the low we experience day to day.
I have been wanting to toy around with the quoted line, because it really grabs me from a song.  This is my rough draft at attempting that.  I just ran with the story my mind came up with at the time.
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Jan 14, 2014
Jan 14, 2014 at 11:26 PM UTC
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