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Whence you look down Upon your work with a slight frown All I see Is beauty Flourishing in all its form Through all your creative ways Is perfection, once lost now found Be it voice, hand and eye This art wears a glittering crown Concentration sketches itself Like you sketch what you love Upon your face, Is all the grace Blessed from high above I admit a spot of jealousy Runs a trickle of pain right through me Whenever I see This art done better than me In voice, eye and hand As beauty takes its final form This preferred art that is your brand Or with perfect voice you perform A better art than mine, Taken with a flourishing finish
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Aug 25, 2015
Aug 25, 2015 at 4:53 AM UTC
Flourishing Finish
Whence you look down Upon your work with a slight frown All I see Is beauty Flourishing in all its form Through all your creative ways Is perfection, once lost now found Be it voice, hand and eye This art wears a glittering crown Concentration sketches itself Like you sketch what you love Upon your face, Is all the grace Blessed from high above I admit a spot of jealousy Runs a trickle of pain right through me Whenever I see This art done better than me In voice, eye and hand As beauty takes its final form This preferred art that is your brand Or with perfect voice you perform A better art than mine, Taken with a flourishing finish
For you, Georgia. If you know me, you know which Georgia I'm talking about. Jealousy is a strong feeling
#art#betterthanme
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26/Trans Female
Aug 25, 2015
Aug 25, 2015 at 4:53 AM UTC
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