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a fine nine, an eye feast, boy of man, a man in his prime boyhood, a creature-so pretty that invokes eye smiles, auto-no-hesitation mop of hair even the day after his haircut, wise and hungry, an adult, a child, in a fine nine year old boy body spout, no, his child-like wisdom adult easy steady and sweet, easy in and easy out, a long strand of a sensible sweet spaghetti softly shared smiling this special child, no kin of mine, and my words can not capture a sweetness so sane, so brilliant, I wonder why to try yet here is this wonderful child on a freezing cold Orchard Street night, surrounded by hipsters, hugging me good night he does not question, does not break away, let's you drink him, and takes freely what you want to feel, a creator, birthing companionship in gentility days later you limbs burn with pleasure of his young arms kind sweet tea, the taste mint, on the tongue of your soul, the brilliant sanity of a nine year old boy who is quietly love-perfect wonderful to hug a gift to me makes me want to live longer in that winter garden, we bite each other, our Adam's apple from the tree of knowledge newly fallen, each sharing a secret, mine - you need never fear; his- you have done ok and await our next rendezvous to exchange new learnings
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Feb 25, 2015
Feb 25, 2015 at 1:16 AM UTC
For Eli
a fine nine, an eye feast, boy of man, a man in his prime boyhood, a creature-so pretty that invokes eye smiles, auto-no-hesitation mop of hair even the day after his haircut, wise and hungry, an adult, a child, in a fine nine year old boy body spout, no, his child-like wisdom adult easy steady and sweet, easy in and easy out, a long strand of a sensible sweet spaghetti softly shared smiling this special child, no kin of mine, and my words can not capture a sweetness so sane, so brilliant, I wonder why to try yet here is this wonderful child on a freezing cold Orchard Street night, surrounded by hipsters, hugging me good night he does not question, does not break away, let's you drink him, and takes freely what you want to feel, a creator, birthing companionship in gentility days later you limbs burn with pleasure of his young arms kind sweet tea, the taste mint, on the tongue of your soul, the brilliant sanity of a nine year old boy who is quietly love-perfect wonderful to hug a gift to me makes me want to live longer in that winter garden, we bite each other, our Adam's apple from the tree of knowledge newly fallen, each sharing a secret, mine - you need never fear; his- you have done ok and await our next rendezvous to exchange new learnings
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Feb 25, 2015
Feb 25, 2015 at 1:16 AM UTC
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