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Isn't it weird how one bad comment can overcome several good comments? Isn't it weird that it's easier to feel bad about yourself than feeling good about yourself? Isn't it weird how evil can be acomplished faster than the good? Isnt it weird that we live in such an intricate world, where the negativity always outcomes the positivity, because no good is left, when the bad often lets you down. Alike charges repel, opposite charges attract. This was our philosophy  in dealing with the atoms in our world. But what about our world? How come all the positivity and the negativity in the world in all of their different forms,  , as they cancel each other, get the world cancelled along?
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May 16, 2014
May 16, 2014 at 4:46 AM UTC
A cancelled world.
Isn't it weird how one bad comment can overcome several good comments? Isn't it weird that it's easier to feel bad about yourself than feeling good about yourself? Isn't it weird how evil can be acomplished faster than the good? Isnt it weird that we live in such an intricate world, where the negativity always outcomes the positivity, because no good is left, when the bad often lets you down. Alike charges repel, opposite charges attract. This was our philosophy  in dealing with the atoms in our world. But what about our world? How come all the positivity and the negativity in the world in all of their different forms,  , as they cancel each other, get the world cancelled along?
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May 16, 2014
May 16, 2014 at 4:46 AM UTC
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