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The world blurs, As the storm clouds my vision. I struggle to stand straight, I cant stand at all... My breathing is shallowed, My head is seeing double.. What is this? Why am I weak? Stand... Straight.. I cant see... This world is spinning, All around me.. (faints)
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Jun 18, 2014
Jun 18, 2014 at 10:27 PM UTC
Everythings Spinning
The world blurs, As the storm clouds my vision. I struggle to stand straight, I cant stand at all... My breathing is shallowed, My head is seeing double.. What is this? Why am I weak? Stand... Straight.. I cant see... This world is spinning, All around me.. (faints)
True poem....
#vision#weakness#fatigue#faint#spinning#blackout#blurr#spikesofpain
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Jun 18, 2014
Jun 18, 2014 at 10:27 PM UTC
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